Happy Independence Day for all you 'Murricans.
Little announcement: I'll be taking a something-cation for a few days. Traffic here is way down anyway during these few days around the midsummer holiday. People in the USA are off doing their own thing.
You've heard of a staycation? A vacation where you don't go anywhere? Then there's a workation, which means you travel somewhere but keep working. Well, I'm taking a few days off for a "stay-home-but-work-on-something-else"...er, -cation.
I'm so underwater it's not even funny. I've spent the last four days working on my book and my photography. Which have both been going great. But I haven't done anything else. Every other aspect of my life I'm way behind on. I need to saddle up the lawnmower in a very bad way, for instance.
I've decided to give in and continue working on the book for three more days. So I'll be taking the next three days off to write. (Well, and mow.) Back on—let's see—Friday morning? We'll see if I can stay away that long.
I love writing
I'm starting to see the light at the end of the tunnel on the book. Tough to say how much is actually done...I've got about 60 pages or 20k words, another 10k words of first draft, and the rest of the book is all blocked out. I've made many, many false starts, but now I've finally got a good beginning. Each time I venture into further first draft, I find I have to first explain to myself in detail everything that happens, then throw out everything I've just written and remake it into scenes with forward-moving action. It's funny, because I've studied fiction and read lots of fiction in my life, but I don't consider myself a fiction reader and I don't read contemporary genre fiction. So along the way I'm doing a lot of research into authors, approaches, and simply familiarizing myself with the proper "tone."
At the same time, I have to be myself. Have you ever heard that old adage that you have to be your authentic self or else you won't know who your real friends are? If you present a false front, you'll just attract the wrong friends. It's the same with writing, I think. You have to be yourself in order to attract your real audience. So I can't just mimic other writers in the genre. I would attract the wrong readers.
I'm slowly learning the way I have to work, working out my own idiosyncrasies and deficiencies. For example, I hate writing first draft. I'm mentally disorganized, for one thing, and get lost easily. Also, first draft is generally bad writing, and I'm insecure enough that "writing bad" makes me feel defeated and pessimistic. I'm odd in that I much prefer to rewrite and polish; it's what I'm best at. (A lot of writers are the opposite.) I'm slowly coming around to the idea that my best bet in book-writing would be to start by writing a 5k-word summary, then make a complete draft, front to back, soup to nuts, in the range of 35–40k words. Then the fun part could begin. In successive rewritings the 40k-word draft would naturally swell to 60k, then 80k, then 100k words without much effort. I'd have fun at that stage. It's just how I am, how I work.
The best thing for me (this just occurred to me) would be to have somebody else write that first 35k-word draft—somebody who's good at plotting and organizing the action into chapters and who likes blocking out first draft. Then I could take over from there in my wordsmith shop, with the fire and the anvil and the hammers and tongs. We'd make a good team, me and that other imaginary writer who's good at everything I'm bad at. But dream on, old boy.
Back soon! If you're on vacation, hope you're having a good one.
Mike
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Maybe AI could write the first 35,000 words.
Posted by: Jimmy Reina | Tuesday, 04 July 2023 at 12:39 PM
I just returned from a vacation in the Poconos and visited the Frank Frazetta museum, which is on a one-lane road off old 209 in E. Stroudsburg. You have to know it's there, but it's a pilgrimage for some.
Anyway, Frazetta nearly always edited his paintings by painting over the previous version. He would create a whole work in one night, so he could easily redo it.
The family started saving copies of some earlier versions as they were just as salable. So, if you start editing obsessively, save some previous versions. You may want to mine them later.
Posted by: Bruce Bordner | Tuesday, 04 July 2023 at 01:26 PM
I took a proposal writing class. One takeaway was "any relationship between the first draft and final is purely coincidental." In other words start scribbling. And in those days it was scribbling and a typist or word processor operator deciphering into readable copy.
Posted by: Greg | Tuesday, 04 July 2023 at 02:17 PM
Yeah, James Patterson can get that pattern to work (I have no idea if it fits his preferences the way it fits yours), because his name on the cover greatly boosts sales. Not so sure somebody good enough to do the first draft would do it at what you could afford to offer.
Although you might find that fixing someone else's mistakes was much more annoying than fixing your own.
Maybe after your first few best-sellers :-) !
Posted by: David Dyer-Bennet | Tuesday, 04 July 2023 at 03:55 PM
Mike
Thanks for your frankness and honesty. At least I know that when I read your book, it's really written and sweated on by a real person.
It is getting to a stage when AI can be used to produce literature, thesis and articles that look so good on the surface but are fakes.
Dan K
Posted by: Dan Khong | Tuesday, 04 July 2023 at 05:00 PM
A ghost-writer could be on option for helping with the first draft.
Not being close to the publishing industry, I wasn’t of this part of it.
Seems that depending on what you want, a ghost writer can be more of a collaborator.
Found out from reading the following article.
https://amp.abc.net.au/article/101981582
Appreciate that there is a cost involved, so may not be viable.
Posted by: Not THAT Ross Cameron | Tuesday, 04 July 2023 at 10:18 PM
Learning how you work best. Man. That's the most profound life skill there is. And I just realised that I have no clue.
But having recognised the profound importance of it (thanks to your post) I'm about to embark on that.
As for writing the framework for you - if it wasn't for my cracked rib, dodgy knee and the writers strike, I'd be all over it.
Posted by: Kye Wood | Wednesday, 05 July 2023 at 12:21 AM
That “somebody else” to write your first draft could be ChatGBT? Good luck with the book; looking forward to the progress. Enjoy your stay-at-home-work-fun-cation!
Posted by: Michael T | Wednesday, 05 July 2023 at 01:12 AM
God bless America and may He remove corruption from the nation's politics.
Posted by: Olybacker | Wednesday, 05 July 2023 at 10:48 AM
Hi Mike. Give me a subject and I'll write you an outline. PDF or Word file?
Posted by: c.d.embrey | Wednesday, 05 July 2023 at 12:34 PM
On second thought maybe me picking the subject is a better idea. I have several that I've already started writing.
Available as plain text, MS Word files or PDF.
If interested send me an email.
There is a difference between lighting and illumination.
Posted by: c.d.embrey | Wednesday, 05 July 2023 at 06:10 PM
"...you have to be your authentic self..." This sort of thing always has me wondering. What if my authentic self likes to pretend to be something else? Then I can only be authentic by being inauthentic.
Posted by: Bill Tyler | Sunday, 09 July 2023 at 10:03 PM